▶ Your Answer : The following bar graph indicates the percentage of both male and female doing regular physical activity by male and female in each age groups of Australia in 2010. Overall, female groups showed (seems 는 추측, 현재 내용은 data 요약이기 때문에 direct하게 표현) more higher percentages than male especially from 35 to 54 age group. All of percentages of male and female from Australia are not bigger than 54%.
The highest level of female participation on sports is shown in the bar chart; an age group from 45 to 54 shows that 53.3 percent of female participated in sports, while male participants only took 43.1%. The highest participation rate of all age groups of men is 52.8% in a group that has age range from 15 to 24.Furthermore, This male group only has higher level of participation than that of women.
A closer look at the data reveals that the female groups from 25 to 65 age, the figures from this has more larger data higher level of participation in sports compared with age groups of men. From 25 to 34 age, The figure of female groups within an age of 15 to 54 shows that they participated in sports more than men who are in the same age. has gradually increased than before, It is clear to see that women in an age group ranging from 55 to 65 and over do more sports than men, but the participation rate is not as high as the groups with an age of 15 to 54.
same age group of women. However, 65 and over age groups have almost same figure with 46.7% and 47.1% from whole age groups.
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- 주어: 스포츠 참여도에 근거해서 작성해주세요. (biggest data, changes as time goes by 등 시간에 따른 data 변화가 아닌 동시대의 성별/인구연령에 따른 차이임을 명시해주세요) - 문장 내 주어/동사 match 가 잘 되지 않습니다. - 통계 내 주요 특징 2~3가지를 overview 에서 작성한 뒤에 각 특징별로 수치를 요약해주세요.
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