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It is often argued that lots of people including seniors and even children even use social media websites. However, if someone shares personal information on social media websites, this behaviour would bring about some dangers. There are both merits and demerits dismerits of this trend, however it is my belief that the positive effects certainly override its negative effects.
On the one hand, there are several disadvantages of using social media such as Instagram and Facebook. One of the main reasons is that children are easily exposed to inappropriate contents easily when they use social media websites. There are many inadequate contents of information like sexual contents (생략 가능하고, 그렇게 해주는 것이 좋습니다.) and violent contents in social media websites. Even if children cannot watch the adult contents well, (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) it is hard to eliminate a variety of adult contents in social media. Another reason can be that sharing personal information creates an opportunity for exploitation of crime. For example, someone posted some information which include personal information on their SNS accounts, person who wants to exploit information sell personal information to earn a lot of money. (여기도 같이 댓글 주세요~)
On the other hand, this option (새로운 문단의 시작이므로, 이게 무엇인지에 대해 다시 한번 상기시켜주세요~) has two major benefits. First of all, by using message function in social media, people can be on intimate terms with a variety of others people even unknown. If someone wants to communicate with a person who is really liked such as celebrity or friend who wants to be friendly, there will be more opportunities to get acquainted with others (여기도 댓글 주세요~). Secondly, people can get tons of (구어체의 표본이라고 할 수 있는 표현이라 꼭 다른 표현으로 바꿔주셔야 합니다.) good information through images and posts on social media websites. For example, when I want to go to a restaurant which sells delicious sushi in Gangnam, I found out the restaurant which is my favourite to use social media. (파란색 부분보다 초록색 부분 쪽에 훨씬 더 많은 비중을 할애해주셔야 합니다.)
To sum up, while there are some disadvantages of using social media websites, it is my belief that the advantages should be carefully viewed. |