Nowadays it is common for people to get
married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
As the economic crisis has not fully recovered for many years, people tend to get marriages in the thirties unlike the last few decades, influenced by their financial conditions and social stability. This phenomenon can be a positive impact on society for two reasons because well-educated children can render the society better in the longer term.
As the person gets older, he/she tends to become wiser having through life experiences. Since this inherent characteristic in the human being, the older parents can teach and educate the children wisely, which causes the stable mentality of children after all. On the other hand, the young parents don’t have enough experiences how to deal with complicatedly intertwined personal problems properly such as getting fired from their jobs, shortage of budgets, and finding their homes. Since struggling with those problems, they are likely not to care about their children enough. Or, even worse, they could abuse, commit violent actions or words to the children on purpose of letting their steam off.
Furthermore, older parents can give more opportunities to the children based on their financial stabilities. In general, in the thirties, the parents are in the well-paid period in their whole careers, which leads to stabilizing the financial conditions. Based on that financial richness, the children can learn what they want and experience diverse educations including hands-on scientific workshops, painting classes with prestigious painters, and appreciating classical music concerts in other countries. In the longer term, those experiences render the children have broader perspectives so that the children can grow up as decent persons with well-balanced knowledges to contribute to society.
In conclusion, I believe that marriages in the older ages compared to the traditionally accepted ages are quite better to society.
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