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Overall, it is clear that the percentages in these three countries has increased, predicting to remain this trend during the entire research period. The proportion of German elderly people had by far the greatest figures (20.45%) while the UK had the smallest percentage (14.23%) at the beginning of the period. Thus, Canada is second nation in this table and this trend has retained by the end of period.
Looking at the table more closely, the nation where has the most increase of percentage is Canada which rises over 10% from 1988 to 2030. On the other hand, Germany and the UK are the countries where have the inclining percentage is under 10%. (from 20.45% to 30.42%, from 14.23% to 20.35% respectively). In terms of Britain, it was the only country that the elderly people are living under 20% in the year 2000.