TOPIC : you are working in an international company.
1. write a letter to inform about your resignation
2. write reason for your resignation
3.when you should join
4. thanks for the opportunity
Dear Mr.Kim,
(내가 누군지, 부서가 어딘지는 적고 들어가는 게 좋습니다.) I am writing this letter to inform you of my resignation. Next Friday is my last day at work.
There are several reasons why I have decided regarding this. As you may know, I am 10 (한 8달 정도로 하는 게 더 현실적이지 않을까요? 출산이 임박한 10달에 갑자기 사표를 내는 상황은 조금 부자연스럽습니다.) months pregnant and the baby is due at the end of this month. It is difficult for me to carry out my tasks and the a heavy amount of workload at work. I can barely walk barely walk as well. In addition to this, I am the only one who can look after the baby after delivery. Although I take maternity leave, it will not probably be long enough.
I humbly appreciate all the opportunities I have been given. From my experience here there, I have acquired a variety of useful skills such as communication, customer service, presentation, and language.
If I can rejoin the company, I would very much to perform with you again. After 2 years, I will be able to start working again.
I feel so sad and many thanks to you for taking care of me so far.
Yours sincerely,
Gwangmook Lim
총평: 논제의 3번 조건이 조금 애매하게 쓰여서 (mookie 님께서 쓰신 내용이 아니라, 논제 자체의 워딩이 조금 애매합니다.) 내용 점수는 일부러 뺐는데, 그래도 10달 관련 내용 정도만 빼면 크게 문제는 없었습니다. 아마 3번은 join 이 아니라 rejoin 으로 되어야할 것 같네요.
시작이 반이다라는 말이 있듯이, 편지글에서는 첫 문단에서 승패가 갈리는 경우가 많으니까, 이에 관련해서 보충해주세요~수고하셨습니다 :)