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The two charts below give information about the number proportions of graduates and postgraduates who did not have full-time jobs after graduating college in the UK in 2008.
It is clear that in both graduates and postgraduates, the category of further study accounted for the highest, and while (and 도 틀린 건 절대 아닙니다만, ~하는 반면에라는 표현을 쓰는 게 문맥상 더 깔끔하게 들어오죠. 이에 따라 while 이 낫습니다.) the least people chose voluntary work in 2008.
Looking at the graphs in more detail, one can see that graduate students studied who more after leaving school, who made up for 29,625 students in 2008. In the case of part-time works and unemployment, two figures were over 15,000 students respectively, while only 3,500 graduates chose the voluntary work in 2008.
In the case of postgraduates, the numbers of learning further were the highest, at 2,725 students, and following people who did part-time work accounted for 2,535 students, which was the second highest in 2008. Over 1,500 students were unemployed, and the numbers of postgraduates who did voluntary work were the least, at only 345 students in 2008.
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