It is controversial that whether nuclear power is beneficial to the world or not. Some people insists that nuclear energy is environmently-friendly and cost-effective. Meanwhile, other people maintains('s'삭제) that it is dangerous due to the possibility of leaking of harmful substances and transferring of the power into the nuclear weapons.
To begin with, nuclear technology is beneficial for energy efficiency. Recently, The shortage of fossil fuels has become it is a huge problem that(문장의 어휘 순서를 좀 바꾸었습니다).There are lots of solutions to be considered to solve this lack of energy. Nuclear energy is currently recognized as the finest energy that is most tangible and alternative in use(순서바꿈 및 몇몇 어휘들을 첨가하여 수정하였습니다). It is easy to build a nuclear power plant and the technology to improve the efficiency of it is getting faster and faster/advanced better rapidly.
It is comparably cheap to make work on nuclear industries rather than whereas other sources of energy.
Moreover, it is more cleaner than any fossil fuels. Even though, it nuclear power plants could make create several wastes during the energy making process(문장순서바꿈) from , the leftovers are merely small and could be excluded simply by burying those underground on the ground. Fossil fuels, on the other hand, left a lot of substances give off immense residues which cause pollution to our natural environment.
***분홍색으로 칠한 부분: idea가 구체적이면 좋겠습니다. 잔 찌꺼기(waste materials/residues)가 왜 많으면 안 좋은지, 왜 environment에 해로운지
등등을 보완하십시요. 예를 들어, 어떻게 pollution이 일어나는지...
Contrary to these advantages, there are several bad effects of using the nuclear energy. First of all, It could be dangerous when it is leaked in public. For example, there was a serious accident causing the leakage of radiation(순서바꿈 및 첨가) in Chernobill in Russia. It has been 30 years since it had happened in 1986. However, there are many people who are still suffering from certain diseases which is regarded to be the cause of from the explosion of nuclear power plants(순서바꿈 및 첨가). If nuclear energy leaks, it would damage human’s body and destroy our environment.
The second reason to oppose using of nuclear technology is that it could be transferred abused into for a bad purpose such as making invention of nuclear weapons. This is why Iran and the North Korea is condemned by many contries.They are attempting to make use of nuclear technology into arm nation's military strength making arms. We could imagine the power of nuclear weapons through the atomic bomb which was used widespread in the world warⅡ.
In conclusion, even if the nuclear technology is beneficial in particular, it has a lot of disadvantages. In my opinion, the advantages of it could not overweigh the bad effects. And We could make use of other alternative sources of energy such as wind, solar and so on other rather than nuclear energy.