Your Answer ▼ The given illustrates show the past look of Grange Park in 1920, and its current look after it has been redesigned. Overall, seats and rose gardens are moved to centre of park, and stage, now is having round shape. (질문해주신 바와 관련해서 하나의 예를 들어드리자면, '엔터테인먼트, 레크리에이션 관련 시설들이 추가되면서 ~~~' 로 시작하는 것도 하나의 방법입니다. 지금 내용의 경우는 '중앙 집중화' 는 좋았으므로 그대로 두시면 됩니다. round shape 는 날리시면 돼요.)
Speaking of the first map, the entrances were on the up and down side, and between them, a fountain was on the centre of the park. A music stage was on the left of the fountain, and rose gardens and seats were beside the stage. A pond and glasshouse were on the opposite side with a rose garden and seats.
Moving to the second map, the fountain is has been (이 문단의 경우 시제는 싹 현재완료로 바꿔주시면 됩니다.) changed to a big rose garden and seats were around that. Another rose garden is still on the left-up side of the centre, and the stage is changed to an the amphitheatre. The pond Pond is moved to the downside, and a waterfall feature is newly built. Next to it, a new entrance to car park is built, (<--- Underground 관련 내용을 넣어주세요~) and children’s play ground and cafe is on upside of the pond.
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