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There is fierce disagreement about the usage of electronic devices for education. Some say a computer is a great educational tool, while others think those equipment interfere with one’s study since it can be used for entertainment. I believe both arguments are well-founded so that it must be compromised.
In a positive perspective, it is an undeniable fact that the Internet offers a substantial amount of information. By using computers or tablets, one can search for a wide range of data easily. Moreover, it does not take a long time to find information. By just a several number of clicks clicking several times, one can have/gain access to massive data. It not only offers information people want to know, but it also allows us (앞에는 people, 여기는 us 라고 적을 경우 인칭 통일이 안 됩니다.) to a new platform of a lecture. Nowadays, many educational institutes made websites or applications that young students can actually take a lesson, along with the assignment. Since it has these advantages, it became one of the effective tools for education.
Nevertheless, even though it (문단에 처음 등장하는 대상이 대명사로 쓰여서는 안 됩니다.) has several benefits, some people worry about the disadvantages. The computer can be helpful by itself, however, young kids are lack of self-control. It is certainly natural for students who want to play with this electronic equipment. The students might want to indulge in online games. If there is no supervision, children would possibly lose self-control. Moreover, a major problem of these devices is that they can be toxic to young people, in consequence of that, it can lead to insomnia and some health problem.
To sum up, the usage of smartphone, tablets, computer for education definitely is a double-edged sword. It facilitates students with searching a vast amount of information. However, it also has a downside, as young students are immature with no self-control, it can cause some problems. I personally think that it benefits the academical career given that there are adults supervision and the well-planned schedule. (논제에서는 장단점만 묻고 있으므로 딱 여기까지만 해주시면 됩니다.)
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