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Improving
schools is the best way to advance a country.
There
are some people who think that increasing school's quality is the top priority
to develop a country. However, in my opinion, it is not effective to invest monetarily
and, furthermore there are a number of crucial elements to make more an advanced
country by focusing on new infinite energy source.
To
begin with, in most of countries, respective governments have concentrated on
improving educational level either by employing well-known teachers and
establish free schools for underprivileged people. However, even though, in an
effort to be high quality of education, this movement has not stretched to help
in order to be an advanced country. According to a research by CNN, even if a
government of USA pointed out the importance of citizen's education by
improving universities, unfortunately, reported education department said that
after calculation, income could not overtake an amount invested. This an
example shows that making an investment is not the most crucial method, but the
other methods like establishing landmark or cooperate with major companies to
promote countries by creating more profits.
On
top of that, the best way to be an advanced country is to exploit a substitution
instead of fuels. Nowadays, with advent of fuels, people have numerous benefits
in comfort in one's lives. Increasing demand of energy to keep lives
convenient, a supply could not meet the demand. As people cannot afford to pay
for oil fees one day, a problem of the rise of oil prices would come to the
fore. According to one of research from Korea, a country having a suitable
energy substitution is also becoming stable country. This trend implies that a
discovery of new infinite energy is likely to a historical spot to step on an
advanced country.
To
sum up, concentrating on development of schools is not the most important task,
but there are more effective ways such as, investment for new energy. In this
regard I do think that setting education on the top priority is not wise way in
order to advance a country.
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