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The chart presents information about consumer spending on various items in five different countries in the year 2002.
To begin with, there is a are remarkable that points that food, drink and tobacco were the most consumed goods by at 32.14% in Turkey and, in the second place was Ireland at 28.91%. The least ones remained are Italy, Spain and Sweden were , which accounted for less than about 19%.
In addition, clothing and footwear in Italy were >> 소모되므로 수동태를 써주세요 consumed the most at 9.00% and the least of them were lower than around 7%.>> 마지막 문장에서 어떤 말인지 잘 모르겠네요 가장 많이 소모된게 이탈리아에서 9%인데 다른 나라에서 가장 낮게 나타난건가요? 2002년만 비교해서 다른 년도이지도 않을테니 자세히 설명해주시기 바랍니다 문장의 맨 마지막에는 마침표를 찍어주시구요 문단을 나누는 것도 문법의 한 종류라고 봅니다 Lastly, consumers in Italy spending >> 사용된게 아니라 사용한 것이므로 능동태의 분사구문을 써주세요 on items of leisure and education at 4.35% was the highest expenditure and the least four rest of countries were minimal under around 3.30%.
In conclusion, in Turkey, consumers prefered to spend food, drinks and tobacco rather than clothing and footwear, and also they liked to consume on leisure and education. Meanwhile, >> 문장이 너무 길어 나눠드렸습니다 Italian was inclined to spend on items of clothing and foot wear than food, drinks and tobacco.
문장 마지막에 마침표를 써주시고 문단을 나누는 것도 그래머의 일종입니다 Task1은 단락이 3개면 됩니다 4개 이상의 단락이나 한 단락에 한 두 문장만 들어가는건 오히려 점수에 감점 요인이 됩니다 또한 다양한 문법을 구사해주시고 다양한 표현방법을 써주세요 예를 들어 3.9%라고 치면 just under 4% 등으로 써주는 등 다양한 방법이 있습니다
Task Achievement - 6 Coherence and Cohesion - 6 Lexical Resource - 5 Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 5
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