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In Korea, many
high school students study alone in a library. However, the older they are like
being a university student, the more importance of group study they feel >> the 비교급 형태는 엄연하겐 맞지 않는 문법의 모습을 띄고 있습니다 따라서 구어체에 어울리며 아카데믹한 라이팅에선 쓰지 말아주시길 바랍니다. I
think each study method has advantages respectively. Which one is better? I
prefer group study to study alone.
First of all, studying
alone is more effective in achieving goals for short time. It Students can focus deeply on the
specific subject deeply. For instance, when I was a high school student, in last
semester, I could pass the final exam to enter a university through studying alone.
The range of the final exam was confined to some subjects such as Math,
English, and so on, which consists of multiple choices problems almost all. Studying
alone helped me concentrate efficiently >> 동사 뒤에 부사를 써주세요 on the exam efficiently for a short term.
However, group
study also offers some merits to the students. During group study, students listen
to diverse opinions from other students. Comparing to other opinions, they can improve
critical thinking and also enhance their communication skill, saying own opinion.
When I was a university student majoring studying >> 영국에선 major보단 studying 이라고 씁니다
in Economics, for example, I could meet a peer >> fellow 가 더 적절하겠네요 enrolled in environmental
engineering. We discussed about well-being for developing countries. I just emphasized
on economic value for poor countries, while he focused on social value as well
as economic value. I could learn about importance of broad understanding and various
departments could contribute to an object.
To sum up, there
are many merits between studying alone and group study. However, when I asked
choose one thing, as far as concerned, I think group study is more effective. It is because
learners are able to get gain >> get은 뜻이 많아 어휘력을 낮춰보이게 할 수 있습니다 useful insights in society from different perspectives.
Through it, their own understanding of the matter on a subject could be further
improved.
우선 본론의 구성은 본인의 경험이 잘 드러나 좋았습니다 다른 기본적인 문법들만 잡아놓으시면 좋은 글을 쓰실 수 있겠네요 빨간 부분들 보시고 모르시는 부분은 다음에 글 올리실 때 혹은 댓글로 남겨주시면 아는 한에서 최대한 답변해드리겠습니다
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