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With the increasing numbers of people who want to study a foreign language, there are some opinions about this phenomenon. One is that learning foreign languages is only for having a trip to or working in a foreign country, whereas someone argues there are additional reasons. This essay will discuss both opinions followed by a reasoned conclusion, agreeing with the latter. On the one hand, no one cannot <(double negative) deny that learning foreign languages is definitely helpful during traveling, and it is needed to have a job in the other countries. Specifically, if we can communicate with foreigners, it should be far easier to organize travel schedules, go doshopping and look around travel spots. In addition, for a job in foreign countries, the language, the first language in of the a certain country is the basic requirement to carry out various tasks. It is impossible to receive orders from customers or to write reports in the office without an ability of that languages. Accordingly, in many cases, job descriptions require a fluent level of the language they use. On the other hand, there are some other aims, which can be achieved by learning foreign languages. Firstly, improving a degree of understanding a variety of cultures is possible, as different languages reflect their own culture. For example, some countries distinguish expressions for equal level of people as a speaker and for older people, suggesting they have a special custom to respect older people. Secondly, we could attain a different concept of various objects, since people contain the way they see the world into their languages. Korean, for instance, use various words to explain similar colors such as blue, light blue, lighter blue, far lighter blue, while some nationalities just have one word for colors that Korean express differently. <(외국어를 배우면 얻을수 있는 목표/할수 있는 것들 보다는 외국어를 배우는/배워야하는/배우게되는 다른 이유들 라는 느낌를 주시면 더 좋을 것 같습니다.) In conclusion, admittedly, traveling to and working in other countries are the main reason for learning foreign languages. However, I believe those reasons are not the only reasons why we learn foreign languages, because it can bring us a leading to understand different cultures as well as the way of seeing the world in different views.
Score: 6.5
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