▶ Your Answer : The table and the charts below clearly depict the statistics created before and after the refurbishment of Ashdown Museum successful refurbishment in terms of quantity and quality respectively. First of all, the volume of visitors has increased after the renovation. In the year before refurbishment, the number of visitors was only 74,000. However, after reformation, it rose to 92,000.
When it comes to the satisfaction of visitors, it becomes more hopeful. (판단 포함 없이 객관적인 수치 요약을 해야 합니다) Except no response group, every other four categories of positive and negative responses changed a lot in a good (주관적 판단입니다) way. The proportion of 'Very dissatisfied' people became half from 10% to 5% after refurbishment while 'Dissatisfied' respondents shrunk to less than a half. With regards to positive responses, 'Very satisfied' visitors became more than a double from 15% to 35%, the number of visitors who were in 'Satisfied' group was 40$%, adding 10% compared to the year before the museum was refurbished.
In conclusion, the refurbhishment changed Ashdown museum greatly in the number of visitors followed by the supporting beutiful statistics of impressions after visiting.
Task Achievement
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Coherence and Cohesion
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Lexical Resource
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Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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5
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6
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3
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6
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5
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