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To whom it may concern,
Hello,
my name is Chris. I recently read an article about school cafeteria in the magazine, and I also wanted to suggest my opinions about cafeteria. I am a student
majoring in accounting. I like using my school’s cafeteria since the cafeteria
always offers good meals with cheap prices. However, I think there are several
things that have to be improved in the cafeteria. That is why I am writing to
you.
--> college magazine에 쓰는 경우는 해당 이슈를 투고하는 형식이기 때문에 인사 이후에 왜 이 내용을 작성하는지를 소개해주세요. (밑줄 예시 참조)
For one thing, cafeteria’s tables and chairs
are too old to be used. As some tables have rusty nails sticking out, it can be
very dangerous for students. Moreover, some chairs make annoying noise when
people use it. You can see the complaints of students about the tables and chairs
on the school’s website.
Also, I hope the cafeteria would offer food
for vegetarians. As the cafeteria does not provide vegetarian menu, many vegetarians
have no choice but to use off-campus restaurants. They said that it was very inconvenient.
I hope the cafeteria would change its tables and chairs as soon as possible. Also, it will be great to provide
vegetarian menu for vegetarians. If you can report these problems on the magazine, it will encourage school to make changes in the cafeteria. (학교 잡지가 이를 보도해서 변화가 생기길 바란다는 방향이 좋습니다. magazine은 you라고 칭하기 어려우며 직접적인 improvement를 만들기 어렵습니다)
I am looking forward to hearing from you
soon.
Sincere,
Chris |