Some people think that having people from different nationalities and cultural backgrounds living together in the same country makes the country develop faster. Do you agree?
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These days, it is common that different races live in a same country. Some people say this situation will make the country progress faster, and I personally agree about that for some reasons.
First of all, people could learn different languages indirectly without going foreign countries in person. Nowadays, a number of people like to leave their country to lean foreign languages, and it results in an amount of expenditure for other nations. If people live together with foreigners, they do not need to expense (이 친구는 명사이고, 동사를 넣어주셔야 합니다.) a lot of money which could be used for their country's development. That is, the diversity of races in a country will boost the advancement of the nation.
Moreover, people could have an ability to understand other cultures. Globalization requires boundless understanding to people when they work or communicate with foreigners. This ability is necessary to raise the reputation of domestic enterprises overseas which contributes to the country's developments as well. Therefore, there is no doubt about living with people from different countries has beneficial impacts on the country's progress.
In conclusion, I personally think that living together with people from different nationalities benefits to the country's progress in terms of reducing foreign spending, and the growth of domestic companies.
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