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The given bar graph indicates the quantity
of electricity that top ten countries produced and consumed in 2014.
Overall, it is clear that in most of
countries, the figures of electricity production were higher than that of
consumption. On the one hand, the gap of amount of electricity between the top
2 country and the top 3 country was widest in 2014.
Looking at the graph more closely, one can
see that production of nine of the countries apart from Germany was larger than
consumption. Especially, the gap between consumption and production in India
was broadest by about 200 billion kWh points, followed by the Unite States. By
contrast, quantity of electricity which made in Germany was lower than that of electricity
which spend in Germany, consisting of 526.5 billion kWh and 582.5 billion kWh,
respectively. In case of rank, while China and the United States accounted for
top 1 and 2 respectively beyond 3000 billion kWh, remaining countries were
below 2000 billion kWh.
항상 첨삭 너무 감사합니다 :) 덕분에 정말 도움이 많이 되고 있어요! 이번에 production, consumption 을 대체할만한 단어가 기억이 안나더라구요ㅠ 찾아봐도 딱히 동의어는 안나오는데, 혹시 어떤식으로 paraphrasing할 수 있을까요?
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