[Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.]
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There are arguments about whether advertisements have impact on persuading the public to buy products. Some people don’t (줄임말은 풀어써주세요!) believe in the power of advertisements as they have become the advertisements got very common these days. However, I strongly agree that advertisements have a has considerable amount of impact on consumers to buy their product.
To take a look on the arguments that regard commercial as powerless, firstly, as the commercials are used for a long time, the consumers know the tactics the companies Companies use for their commercials. Secondly, as the commercials only show consists of the positive traits of the product, all the commercials are perceived as the same. In these days, the impact of the review of the users are bigger than any other commercials. Lastly, as the number of commercials is numerous, people started to get tired of the commercials. As a result, the potential consumers started to skip the commercials or even pay the fee to enjoy the contents without commercials.
On the other hand, in the case of the part where the commercials could be affective enough to persuade the consumers to buy their products, As as the consumers has found out the tactics they use, the commercials have started to evolve too. As the public feel uncomfortable about the straight forwarded commercials, it started to deliver the information in a more curved way. For some examples, regarding the public feel more trustworthy to the reviews of the actual users of the product, the companies changed their tactics to deliver their message by YouTubers You tubers. In these days, the growth rate of the Youtube market is getting bigger rapidly. Moreover, the relationships between the creators and the subscribers are intimate, and this leads to the development of trust towards the creators.Thus, commercials using this relationship will get the effect for consumers by creating a sense of listening to a review from a close friend.
Overall, even though there are pros and cons about the effectiveness of the commercials, I believe that the commercials have the impact towards consumers even though there are too many, as the method of advertising is keep continuously evolving as the public do, in order to make the commercials effective.
EXAMINER’S USE ONLY | Total Score: 7.0/9 | Examiner: | | TR (Task Response) | CC (Coherence and Cohesion) | LR (Lexical Resource) | GRA (Grammatical Range and Accuracy) | Score | 7/9 | 7/9 | 7/9 | 7/9 |
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Comment ▼ 지금으로써도 상당히 잘 쓰인 글이긴 합니다. curved way 등의 좋은 표현도 많이 보였고요. 대신 대소문자 등에서 자잘한 오류가 거의 없었다면 7.5나 그 이상도 가능했을 글이어서 이 부분은 조금 아쉽긴 하네요.
그래도 7.0은 충분히 보장됩니다!
수고하셨습니다 :) |
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