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For most people, the dos and don’ts (일반적으로 줄임말은 풀어써주셔야 하긴 하는데, 이 경우에는 예외적으로 줄여쓰는 게 좋긴 하겠네요.) are often decided by their parents. In this regard, it is often argued that their success can also depend on them. However, some people think that parents are probably not the cause. I also agree with them and will discuss the reasons in this essay.
Actually, adults are independent beings and can think and behave on their own to be a successful person. This is why successful parents do not always have successful children, and unsuccessful parents do not always have the same unsuccessful children. What is the most important thing is one’s own belief that they are, or can/will be (고칠 게 없어서 msg라도 쳐드리겠습니다.) successful. This belief in themselves can lead them to a different life.
Also, the environment can actually be more important for the success of many individuals. (이 첫 문장에서는 환경을 얘기하고 있지만, 정작 이어지는 사항은 환경이라기보다는 노력에 가까워보이네요.) Especially adults spend most of their time away from home without parents, and their parents can rarely affect their behaviours. They can stay at home if they still like to do so, but it does not guarantee a successful life, and they might have to try harder to change themselves and make a success.
In conclusion, successful parenting is not the cause of an one individual’s success. This is because their life and success can be managed only after they themselves understand and believe themselves. |