In our society, it is convinced that men and women work, study and socialize together.
In most cultures, both genders take part equally in these in activities. The one area that we separate the sexes is in single sex school.(An exception is a single sex school.) The coeducation has been considered to be serious a controversial issue. (요거 앞문장하고 자연스럽게 연결이 안되는거 같습니다.) some people insist become aware of the fact that the coeducation has a lots of positive effects ways when men and women study together. Other, however, take into consideration that it is negative in some mean for student to study together. fear that it have a number of negative influences. In this essay, not only the drawbacks but also the benefit will be discussed in detail and an appropriate conclusion will be presented.
In view of supporting the former opinion, coeducation can could give a lot of benefits to student.
Obviously, men and women can have time to understand about each other. It is generally accepted that teenagers can accepted easily what they are taught. Hence, if student both men and women are in class, they will understand the role as men and women and realize what they do for each other.(논리의 전개가 이상합니다. 직역해보면 십대들은 배우는 것을 쉽게 받아들인다. 그러므로 만약 남녀가 함께 배운다면 각각이 서로에 대해 할 수 있는 역할에 대해 이해하기 쉬울것이다. ; 이런쪽이기 보다는 차라리 서로 같이 배운다면 부족한 점을 채워 줄 수 있다. 라고 하는 편이....: Considering the different abilities between boys and girls, they can help each other with different areas and result in better education effects rather than studying in single sex school. It is meaningful for men and women to accept furthermore, competition between different kinds of people is expectedpossible. We might point out that as sexual wall is broken, student will compete with each other without a sexual discrimination.(이것 보다 좀더 정확한 근거가 필요하리라 생각됩니다.)
As far as the latter opinion is concerned, there will be a number of drawbacks, if under coeducation is operated. Firstly, students may fail to concentrate on studies and hang out with each other. it is no exaggeration that because teenagers students are curious to know about people with different genders. men and women each other. This is the reason why they can not focus on their studies and hang out. In addition, sexual relation can be made. They are curios enough to make sexual relation. This problem is that most people who have a strong objection are concerned. It can cause serious social problems like early pregnancy and single mother issues As they adolescents do not appropriately know how to control their desire and the power of the self-control, students can make some serious problem easily. In other word, the chance to get a attractive thing is opened.
From the above facts, there are plenty of reasons for coeducation.(이런 문장보다는 위의 내용을 한번 간단히 정리하는 문장이 더 좋을 것 같아요.) What`s importantce is that individuals education policies should encourage students to make a right decision and judgment. Considering both drawbacks and merits, we have to try to set up the alternative plan so as to solve and make up for the weak point.