In our society, it is convinced that men and women work, study and socialize together
In most culture, both genders take part equally in these in activities. The one area that we separate the sexes is in single sex school. The coeducation has been considered to be serious
some people become aware of the fact that the coeducation has a lots of positive ways when men and women study together. Other, however, take into consideration that it is negative in some mean for student to study together.
In this essay, not only the drawbacks but also the benefit will be discussed in detail and an appropriate conclusion will be presented
In view of supporting the former opinion coeducation could give a lot of benefits to student.
Obviously, men and women can have time to understand about each other. It is generally accepted that teenager can accepted easily what they are taught. Hence, if student both men and women are in class, they will understand the role as men and women and realize what they do for each other. It is meaningful for men and women to accept furthermore, competition between different kinds of people is possible. We might point out that as sexual wall is broken, student will compete with each other without a sexual discrimination.
As far as the latter opinion is concerned, there will be a number of drawbacks, if coeducation is operated. Firstly, students fail to concentrate on studies and hang out with each other. it is no exaggeration that students are curious to know about men and women each other. This is the reason why they can not focus on their studies and hang out. In addition, sexual relation can be made. They are curios enough to make sexual relation. This problem is that most people who have a strong objection are concerned. As they do not know how to control their desire and the power of the self-control, students can make some serious problem easily. In other word, the chance to get a attractive thing is opened.
From the above facts, there are plenty of reasons for coeducation. What`s importance is that individuals should encourage students to make a right decision and judgment. Considering both drawbacks and merits, we have to try to set up the alternative plan so as to solve and make up for the weak point.
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