In some countries, there are women taking positions in male dominated occupations such as police officers and soliders. Some people belive that woemn are not suited to such work. TO what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it is widely accepted that a range of women's job is getting various, compared with past but Some people belive that a particular occupations like police, solider,odd-job man at some construction sites and so on are not suitable for women while others thinks it is not. This essay will discuss the reason why i agree with this opinion
First, I think there is a certain physical gap between man and women moreover, Man has more powerful strengh than women by genetic reason , it is just not a prejudice. for example, the work place,carrying on hard steel beams, is hard to find women. of course, The factors which are dirty and difficult contribute to avoid this kind of job. but more significant reason is that women is hard to handle this kind of jobs by lack of power. in addition these jobs like solider and cap relate to a survive, it is neccesary a good body for people to survive. surviving demands a various things which are as follows; response, speed something like that but one of important factors of survive is a strengh.therefore,by these reasons, Man has more suitable factors in a particular jobs
Second, Women has more weakness than man. Generally, female feels shame easily than man. for instance, when people carry out a heavy stuff under A sharply Sunlight, Man takes off his clothes(Top Area) easily but women don't do like that. Moreover, women have a period pains monthly and as they face the day when they have a period panis, they can be easily more cranky and hysterical and some women who are very sensitive feel a huge pain, which is not enougf to handle what they do now. Thus, This is second reason why women are not apt for those jobs.
In conclusion, I agree that man has adventages for dangerous jobs than women because of physical gap and shame
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