▶ Your Answer :
You
should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You
have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are
worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write
a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce
yourself
describe
your plans for the party
invite
your neighbour to come
Write
at least 150 words.
You
do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin
your letter as follows:
Dear
................. ,
Dear Thomas,
My name is Ykim, who recently moved next to
your house. I love my new place for its peaceful silence. This environment
enables me to do my job, a book writer.
However, unfortunately, I might make a bit of
noise on coming Saturday due to my new-house-moving party. Thus, I am writing
this letter to notify and, at the same time, invite you to my home party.
The party will start form 7:00PM along with
a delight music. There will be some finger foods and sparkling wines available.
During the party, we will have a pool competition and I will reward a winner
with my newly published book ‘How I met your mom’. Most importantly this whole
party is planned to be finished at 11:00pm.
Such a playful party will likely to make a
loud sound and annoy your weekend. Thus, if it is possible, I greatly want your
family to come and enjoy party together.
I hope to hearing from you with your warm
acceptance on my home event.
Yours sincerely,
YKim
Ps. If you are unhappy about my party as
itself, let me know so I can discuss this matter with you at your spare time.
You
should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write
about the following topic:
Using
a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your
children.
Do
you agree or disagree?
Give
reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.
Write
at least 250 words.
It
has long been worldwide noticed that the computer contributed convenience of
our lives in many aspects. However, torn by modern technology, our society
raises questions ‘whether daily use of computer has negative or positive effects
on the youth’. For this issue, I believe demerits from using computer daily
outweigh its positives.
To
start with, computer breaks down boundaries of time and distance, which enables
children to have broadened insights on the world, at anytime at anyplace. This
inseparably has downsides. For instance, pornography can be accessed easily and
freely with the internet, one of the computer’s features. It is reported that
the age of person who rapes is lowered and the use of computer is depicted as
one of the major factors to such a phenomenon. Thus, daily use of computer acts
as a negative catalyst for children’s matureness.
Moreover,
the children at technology age are not as fit as those of past generations.
This is simply because; the youth spend most of their time in studying academic
materials. The current practice in Korea schooling highlighted the problem
associated with computers as an everyday utility. Most children at age of 15 to
17 get rid of their stress and refresh themselves with computer games, not by outdoor
activities. (1) For this struggle, the Korean government
established the restriction on a computer using hours. The school also
encourages students to do sports activities. This illustrates the addition of
computer use in relation with both mental and physical weakening of children.
In a nutshell, the computers are beneficial tools for daily life but day by day computer
habit of children has more negative results than optimistic outcomes. Therefore,
it must be managed by appropriate manner for the youth. Since they will lead
the bright future, it is our responsibility to cherish them in a right direction.
(1) In addition, these computer games involve violence, which children are influenced in short time.
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