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The data illustrates information about percentage changes of the percentage in average
house cost of house in five different main cities between 1990 and 2002, comparing to in
1989.
Looking at the whole chart, the average house prices of house between 1990 and
1995 mainly declined comparing with in 1989. >> 문장이 길어서 끊어드렸습니다 Meanwhile, there were significant rises
between 1996 and 2002, except Tokyo. In detail, New York, Tokyo and London were
over five per cent cheaper than in 1989 between 1990 and 1995. Only Madrid and
Frankfurt slightly rose slightly during this period. On the other hand, there were different
aspects between 1996 and 2002. Every city increased>> 도시가 상승했나요? 모든 수치들 등이 상승했다고 표현하는게 맞겠습니다 >> 콤마 빼주세요 and it ranged from 2 per cent
to 12 per cent, while Tokyo dropped by 5 percent. The most noticeable figure was
London which was 12 percent more than the average house price in 1989.
To sum up, the average residential cost in five cities between
1990 and 2002 experienced many changes. Mostly, there were decreases for the first 6
years, but most of cities had more expensive housing prices for the next 7 years.
문법적으론 오류가 꽤 있었지만 그래도 흐름은 괜찮았습니다 단어나 문법의 다양성을 더욱 늘려주시면 좋겠네요 per cent 띄어주시길 바랍니다 Task Achievement - 6 Coherence and Cohesion - 6 Lexical Resource - 5 Grammatical Range and Accuracy -5 5.5 예상합니다 |