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Nowadays, the world has been globalized. Many people often go abroad because of different reason;>> 세미콜론 붙여주세요 앞 단어랑 study, settlement, trip, and so on etc.
Some people think visitors to other countries have to follow local customs, >> 쉼표입니다 but others think local people have to acknowledge cultural differences. >> 테스크와 너무 비슷합니다 이게 서론 형식이고 위에 글은 약간 세부적입니다 서론에 어울리지 않습니다
Before I present my standpoint, we should think both sides of that.
To begin with, sometimes, we need to follow local customs and behavior. >> 알맞은 주장이 아닙니다 문제가 따라야 하냐 마느냐입니다 따른다면 왜 따르는 지에 대한 주장이 필요합니다 This method makes foreign tourists adapt there and local people feel comfortable to us to the local environment to feel comfortable to travelers. When we want to achieve our goal, a sense of familiar helps us.
While On the other hand, acknowledging cultural differences need to us to keep the peace. If we think that ' only I'm only right', conflictions always may always happen every day>> we 같은 말은 예시에서만 씁니다. For example, when I was a student, I often fight with my friends. Each other thought that ' only I have only a justice'. but However, as I get>> get 동사는 피해주세요 older, I realized acknowledge opinions from other sides are necessarily.
In conclusion, both perspectives are have a strong point. so >> so also but or and 는 문두에 쓰지 않습니다 we have to apply appropriate behavior according to situations.
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글도 너무 짧습니다 본론 구성도 어려워보입니다 스펠링 잘 체크하시구요 품사 위치 보시고 부사는 위치에 따라 의미가 달라집니다 ( eg. I only have a ball= 나는 오직 공만 가지고 있다, Only I have a ball= 오직 나만 공을 가지고 있다) 아직 Task2 를 구성하기엔 이른 듯 싶습니다 우선 문법, 단어 공부하시고 Task1을 써주세요 |