It is true that technology negatively affects in the modern world, particularly the environment. In this regard, some argue that scientists should stop their innovative activities and concentrate on of the resolution of environmental problems. In my opinion, scientists should pay attention not only to the innovation and invention of technology but also to solving the problems in the environment.
To begin with, there are several reasons why scientists should continue developing or inventing technology. People will not stop using technology, because the effective fulfillment of their tasks depends on it. For example, people take cars or public forms of transportation to go to school or work these days. Clearly, people's lives have become convenient due to the development of transportation. Admittedly, the air has become polluted as a result of technology. Thus, if scientists do not continue inventing new technology and exploring ways to make it less harmful to the environment, then the current technology might just cause more harm in the future. <(내용을 만약에 과학자들이 ~하지 않으면~ 보다는 오히려 이 문제점들을 과학자들이 기술을 발전하면서 커버를 할 수있기 때문에 발전을 멈추기보다는 계속해야한다 라고 해주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.)
Nonetheless, scientists also need to concentrate on solving environmental problems. People have destroyed the environment and natural resources like land, air and water. If scientists do not try to solve these problems now, it will be impossible for the environment to recover. Worse, it might not be be able to support lives in the future.Therefore, scientists should pay attention to solving the environmental problems too.
In conclusion, scientists should balance their efforts between innovating and inventing technology and finding solutions to the environmental problems. Continuous technological development is necessary is necessary to sustain quality of life and is the key to the prevention of environmental deterioration. This can be achieved by encouraging scientists to develop environment-friendly technology that will ensure a healthy and clean environment in the future.
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