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In many countries, traditional customs have disappeared.
What do you thin are the causes of this and what measures could be taken to solve them?
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Ancestral rites and practices are rapidly disappearing in most nations around the world. There are a variety of possible reasons for this, but governments, society and parents could certainly steps to address this issue.
In my opinion, three main factors are able to blame for the demise of traditional customs in my countries. Firstly, lack of influence of parents in upholding traditions. As generations pass, fewer customs are passed, and nowadays, upholding traditions and customs in the home through teaching children is no longer a priority of parents. Secondly, excessive inflow of western cultures, which makes many people try to fit in with the trend of western culture rather than keeping tradition and custom. Finally, many young people do not choose to learn difficult traditional customs culture. This is because young people tend to like simple things.
Traditional customs can certainly be revived. I believe that parents should exert their authority and teach their children about old customs through practice at hoe. Parents should accept that their children are growing up in a different world, and they must find ways to insert traditions they would like their children to embrace. Also, government should refrain from excessive inflow of western culture by laws in order to keep ancestral rites and practices. At the same time, society needs simplification of difficult traditional customs and prepare programs to educate them.
In conclusion, We will continue to face the loss of traditional customs and its problems unless parents, government and community make an effort to revive disappearing traditions and customs.
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