Dropping rubbish on the streets and the countryside is increasing.
what are the reasons and what can be done to solve this problem?
Recently, throwing garbages on the avenues and the countryside has been increasing. In this regard, this essay will deal with reasons about the above situation and we also provide an effective solution at the end.
In fact, many people tend to throw garbages in the trash can, but unfortunately there is a lack of trash cans in the downtown and countryside which place they are living unfortunately. This is the reason why people throw the garbage anywhere. In addition, the low awareness about the environment of the majority of people is the reason. They did not feel an environmental crisis and importance due to educational shortage. Those two main factors make people throw the rubbish to any place without any concern and hesitation.
For solving To solve (bddt님의 경우 대체로 ~를 위해서를 쓸 때 For ~ing 로 쓰시는데, 이게 해석하면 한국어로는 맞지만, 문법상 문제가 뚜렷하게 있는 것도 아니지만, 약간 원어민이 봤을 때 어색한 표현으로 보시면 됩니다. 그냥 To ~ 혹은 In order to ~이런 식으로 써주세요! 이건 그냥 암기하시면 편합니다.) the issue of environment fundamentally, the government has to provide trash bins as many as possible in the streets and countryside. Moreover, educational provinces should make new academic course and it is called environmental education. Those schemes will definitely improve the situation definitely since main reasons are removed which are the fundamental problem, low consciousness of people and the structural reason, not enough to provided trash cans. (여기는 댓글 한번 주세요~)
In conclusion, main problems the main reasons of ~~쓰레기가 많은 것 were public's low awareness about the environment due to lack of education and trash can's shortage. To solve the above problems, governments need to provide a lot of trash cans in public and educational institutions have to impose new environmental training courses in the academic process quickly. If this happens, people can live in the clean society by preserving our precious environment as well.
총평: (7/6/6/5) 6.0
위의 to ~~ 혹은 in order to ~~ 는 그냥 외워두세요! 한국어의 경우로 예를 들면, '생각 되어집니다.' 와 같이 문법상 전혀 문제가 없지만 토종 한국인들이 봤을 때 고개를 갸우뚱하는 표현들이 있죠. ~하기 위해를 for ~ing 로 적는 것은 마치 이와 비슷하다고 보시면 됩니다. 일단 이에 대해 대략의 설명은 드렸지만, 그냥 단순 암기하고 다른 거에 집중하는 게 훨씬 좋을 거에요.
내용 자체에는 크게 문제가 없었습니다. (bddt님의 경우 극히 예외적인 경우를 빼면 Task 2에서 내용상 문제는 거의 없습니다.) 대신 표현이 문제가 되는 상황이니까, 문법 공부:task 2 작성:task 1 작성의 비율을 7:2:1 정도로 둘만큼 중요시해야 합니다. 문법+어휘가 진짜 귀찮은 작업이긴 한데, 고득점이 필요하신만큼 어쩔 수가 없죠. 파이팅입니다!
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