Your Answer ▼The line graph illustrates the percentage of tourists to England who visited an art gallery, pavilion, pier and festival (이전과 마찬가지로, 여기도 가능하면 나열하지 않는 습관을 들이는 게 좋습니다.) in Brighton between 1980 and 2010.
Firstly, it is clear that at the beginning of the period, the most highest percentage of tourists visited the ('브라이턴 내의' 축제를 의미하므로, the 는 들어갑니다.) festival. The figure was around 30% in 1980. Also, it was followed by the percentage of attendances in pavilion and the number of people in art gallery. The figures were 23% and 25%, respectively. It also can be seen that the percentage of tourists in art gallery and festival were almost similar at the first period. In addition, the lowest percentage (percentage 의 경우는 rate, share 등의 동의어가 존재하므로 이를 적극적으로 활용해주시는 게 좋습니다.) of visitors was in pier in the same period. This figure was only around 10%.
It is also noteworthy that there were some changes at the end of the period. The number of people (여기와,) in pavilion showed an increase and became the highest percentage of among four different attractions. The figure was approximately 32% in 2010. However, the number of people in pier had a slight decrease, but tourists visiting this attraction were gradual during 30 years. (윗 부분과 여기 자체는 표를 통해 알 수가 없는 사항입니다. 표에서는 관광객의 수와 관련해서는 아무런 정보도 보여주고 있지 않죠. 관광객의 수가 아닌, 관광객의 비율이 gradual 했다고 작성해야 정확한 표현이 됩니다.) Finally, it is notable that the percentage of guests in pier rose consistently; the figure was gain rose from 10% to 22%. To sum up, the percentage of visitors in pavilion and pier showed increases while the number of guests in art gallery and festival decreased. (서론 뒤로 옮겨주세요~) |