Probably one of the most worrying threats to our (내 의견임/경험임을 직접적으로 드러내는 경우를 제외한, 즉 I think~~ 등의 표현을 제외한 모든 1인칭은 사용되지 않도록 수정해주세요~바로 밑의 we 역시 수정 대상에 해당됩니다. 혹시 어떻게 해야할지 모르신다면 댓글 주시면 알려드리겠습니다.) planet at the present time is the destruction of destroying wild forestland. Despite the fact that we have to protect the wild forest to improve the quality of air, a number of trees are being cut down to be used in agricultural land. This essay will explain the reasons why wild forestland is rapidly disappearing and discuss some possible solutions.
The main cause of the decrease in decreasing wild forest is a large-scale agricultural activity. With the development of agricultural technology, farmers have been able to cultivate farmland much larger than in the past. Farming on a large scale benefits farmers economically. This is because they can be price competitive by producing one kind of crop on a large scale. Moreover, the wild forest is removed to raise more livestock. For example, the The Amazon loses large areas annually for land to feed cattle.
Nevertheless, there are potential ways to solve these problems, or at least reduce the effects. Firstly, the government has to support to develop agricultural technologies in order that to reduce our dependence on traditional farming methods which required much land. Also, strict rules should be imposed to prevent unnecessary damage to nature. For example, if the government limits the number of trees that are cut down to create new farmland or imposes high taxes on that, it could reduce the speed at which the forest is destroyed.
In conclusion, although destroying wild forests is a serious problem, it can be solved by government efforts. (결론을 이렇게 적을 경우, 없으니만 못합니다. 원인에 대한 요약, 그리고 해결책의 양상에 대한 요약을 해주세요~)