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It is a common belief
that the state-of-the-art agricultural technology can save
more people who have been starved for a long time. However, I firmly
believe that hungry people still remains even though high level agricultural
technologies are available. (배고픔의 원인이 무엇인지, 그리고 어떻게 이를 해결해야 할지를 적는 것이 중요합니다. 이에 관해서 양상까지 서론에 적을 필요는 없지만, 글의 전개에 대한 예고는 해주시는 게 좋아요.)
To begin with, the foods which are produced by using high technology are so expensive. The more technologies are applied to make a food, the more costs to purchase new foods are going to be increased. For example, nowadays, there are so many brand-new sorts of vegetables and grains. These foods have a lot of nutrients and antioxidants which have more effects to make our (내 의견/경험임을 직접적으로 드러내는 경우를 제외한 모든 1인칭은 사용하지 말아주세요~) body more healthier. However, While some people can purchase regardless of money, but others cannot do so buy because of the high cost.
Overall, I think that government has a responsibility for to care those who are starved. The government gathers money from people called "tax", (tax 가 무슨 뜻인지는 충분히 상식 선에서 통하는 사항이라, 굳이 설명해주실 필요는 없습니다. 분량 채우기에 지나지 않아요.) which is always need to use for people's welfare. In fact, all countries have money to pay for making people comfortable. By using this, government can give foods to poor people for saving them. Furthermore, government also need to give a chance for poor people to get a job, that results in earning money and taking care by themselves.
To sum up, it is clear that many people think there is no more starvation because of the development of agriculture. However, it is evident that there are still remained poor people all around the world and government have obligatory to deal with them well by supplying the foods and giving a chance to get a job. |