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The layouts illustrate the structure of both the present university's sports center and the one after reconstruction. 

Overall, present indoor of the sports center will be preserved but all outdoor courts will be combined to the building, which are replaced to a leisure pool, two dance studios, two changing rooms, sports hall and amenities such as sports shop and cafe.

According to present university sports center layout, the building has 25m pool, gym, changing room, seating, and reception. (단순히 이런 게 있다고 작성하는 데에서 머무르면 TR 쪽 점수도 6점 이상을 넘기기가 어렵습니다. 위치 표현 등과 관련해서 어느정도의 구체성이 필요해요.) In addition, there are outdoor courts which are positioned at east and west part of the sports center.

Looking at the future plans of sports center redevelopment more closely, present structures of the sports center will be maintained and outdoor courts in west will be replaced to leisure pool, changing room and sports shop. The right side of the sports center will be altered to the sports hall, dance studios, changing room and cafe. Moreover, the gym will be enlarged around 2-fold.

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현재 글은 구체성이 너무 부족합니다. 이 글은 그저 각 시설들이 무엇을 대체할 것이다 정도만 다루고 있으므로, 지도에 대한 완벽한 분석이 되었다고 보기 어렵습니다. 뭐가 어디를 어떻게, 어디에서 대체했는지 등을 보다 정확히 작성해서 글을 보완해주세요~수고하셨습니다 :)