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It is a common belief that self-driving systems for their vehicles are dangerous. However there is a more persuasive argument that self-driving systems are useful and safe in many cases. On the one hand, a machine is not perfect, and systems go down sometimes and make get errors. People are not also perfect but we they do not get viruses like the machines, thus people have better judgment than self-driving systems. Recent statics of self-driving in America has shown that cars drove driven by self-driving systems made bigger accidents and made more death than vehicles driven by people. This makes it clear that self-driving systems are not yet ready on the road. Nevertheless, automobile manufacturers creating this system was a big innovation in our lives. (이렇게 작성하시면 manufacturuer 가 삶에 있어 큰 혁신이 되었다는 의미가 되어버립니다. 혁신의 대상은 시스템이므로, 이 의미가 담길 수 있게 수정해주세요!) We can not control or restrain people’s behaviour, like drinking liquor and driving, however machines can be are controlled (동일 문장 내에 control 이 있으므로 여기는 가급적이면 대체해주시는 게 좋아요.)by humans. For instance, in the interview of truck drivers, driver said that they drive more than 10 hours a day, so they get tired. Due to this problem bis accidents come up and take people’s lives. When using self-driving systems on trucks they do not have to wrest or make accidents because it is machine. They just follow the roads everyday and everynight. To sum up, while there are some disadvantages using self-driving system it is evident, the advantages of this system outweigh (여기에 대해서는 총평에서 말씀드리겠습니다.) them. |