Your Answer ▼ Sedack In modern society, numerous kinds of jobs have been disappeared and made. While some people believe that a permanent job is better than one that people can enjoy enjoying job, others think job satisfaction is further important than job security. In this essay, both views and my personal opinion will be discussed.
First of all, some people more care more (more care 도 틀린 건 아닙니다.) about the job security than satisfaction because they pursue a safe life (이런 식으로 완전하게 적어주셔야 합니다. 한국어로 바꿔만 봐도, 안전삶 때문에~~~ 라고 적는 것과, 안전한 삶을 추구하기 때문에~~ 라고 적는 것은 확연히 다르죠.) of safety life. If permanence of job is unstable, people would always struggle with the possibility of losing that whenever they can lose their job at anytime which is directly linked to money for living. That is, an unstable job means an unstable life, while a and stable job means a stable life. For example, numerous temporarily hired people are suddenly fired without opportunities to change their job and endangered in poor life.
However, other people believe that how much satisfied they are from their work job is most important. They think, if people cannot enjoy and love their job, the job is just a work which is mentally and physically demanding. Although people can earn money regardless of whether they are satisified with no matter they are satisfying their job, stress from an unsatisfactory job could ruin their life in various aspects. As an example, these days, a number of people feel depression from the fact that they should work without no enjoyment in their tasks.
In conclusion, even though it is true that job security is one of the important factors of job, I personally think that job satisfaction is most important for the reason of that it is directly linked to the quality of life. |