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These days, there are a great number of people who drive their own vehicles. About this, there is the issue of whether the government should impose a penalty on drivers on the road during rush hour. Some people say that the government should impose a fee on them to help reduce the number of cars, which lead to air pollution. Others mention that the government should guarantee people's freedom of driving which can drive whenever they want. My opinion is totally belonged to the former.
To begin with, imposing a rush hour fee can make the drivers use public transportation instead of their own car, diminishing air pollution form exhaust fumes. To be more specific, if the government imposes a fine during rush hour (여기, 핵심 단어들이 안 쓰이도록 한번 간추려보시고, 고민해보신 다음에 결과물을 댓글로 주세요~이 과정에서 실력 향상이 이루어질 수 있습니다.), most people do use public transit as commuting means as rush hour means that a lot of workers get off their work at the same time. This can lead to cutting down air pollution from form exhaust fumes. In Europe, for instance, the government has started imposing a fine on driers who drive over the limited number a week. As a result, lots of people started to use public transportation, carpool, and bicycle instead of using vehicles. This regulation brought about a result, which is not only relieved traffic congestion, but decreased the level lever of air pollution.
On top of that, the government would make the cities, where are getting to be polluted by cars, more beautiful and healthy by using penalties (penalthy 와 fee 는 전혀 다른 사항입니다. 패러프레징하는 것은 매우 좋지만, 그 과정에서 의미가 달라지지 않도록 주의해주세요!) from drivers. It means that the government can install some air cleaners on the streets as well as plant some flowers and trees that are helpful for polluted air. (<----- 이 문장의 경우도 걷어들인 ~~를 통해~~라는 문장이 필요합니다.) In effect, in some countries, governments spend all the fees from drivers only on improvement of environment pollution.
To sum up, the fine from drivers during rush hour will definitely help environment maintain cleanness as well as alleviate traffic jam in rush hour. For these reasons, charging a penalty on specific drivers will help cut down air pollution from form vehicles. |