Your Answer ▼ It is a common belief that the (관사 사용과 관련해서 헷갈리시면, 논제에 있는 걸 그대로 따라해주시면 됩니다.) extended family is still valuable as it was did before. However, there is a more persuasive argument that the importance of the extended family decreased a lot by with the change in changing how to recognize contemporary household life.
On the one hand, the increase of grandparents who help their grandchildren shows that why extended family is important. With both parents working outside the home, there is now a need for a third party to care for the children during the day. Grandparents often step in to fill this role. In fact, research in Korea shows that grandparents are now twice as likely (이 두 배라는 수치가 '왜' 도출되었는지를 짧게나마 적어주셔야 합니다.) as they were a decade ago to play a primary role inn raising their grandchildren. It represents that extended family has big role of people life still now.
Nevertheless, the young age extended family who thinks their education and carrer carrrear should be a priority recognize that household is less important than those. This is evident in the fact that many young people nowadays choose to leave their hometowns permanently to seek education or career opportunities elsewhere. They, therefore, Therefore, they (이렇게 바꾸면 불필요한 쉼표 하나를 없앨 수 있죠.) often live in different cities or countries from their families. Thus, the extended family is much less prominent in their lives. (여기서 새로운 문단으로 갈 필요는 없습니다. 그냥 밑의 중국 내용과 쭉 하나로 이어주세요~이것도 점수에 들어가는 사항입니다.)
For example, many Chinese college students express a desire to emigrate after graduation, even if it means that they would almost never see their families. Although extended families were once very important in Chinese culture, on these days extended family is less considered.
To sum up, while it is apparent that the extended family is still valuable in many ways, it is undeniable that this role is decreased in daily life of people, now. (여기도 이전 세 개의 글과 마찬가지이고요. discuss both 에서는 단순히 윗 두 본론을 요약하고 끝내는 것이 아님에 명시해주세요!) |