Full-time university students should spend a lot of time studying, but it is essential to be involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that most of full-time university students have to spend lots of time on studying while involving in other activities. Although other people argue that they have to involve in other activities vitally, it seems that involving in other activities should not be compulsory
To begin with, participating in several other
activities, full-time university students can experience so many things, which
leads to them to learn social experience and have social skills. It is quite
transparent that people who went through a wide range of experiences work
better than those who did not. That is because, since experiencing a variety of
situations before, they know the way how they have to deal with it. By
contrast, in terms of people who did not experience a lot of situations, if
they face something unfamiliar, they will not manage to it. For this reason,
full-time university students have to be involved in several activities.
On the other hand, since they are too tired
from studying, they cannot focus on other activities. With this reason, it just can be a waste of
time. Furthermore, making them take part in activities can make them do other
things and sleep in activities. Instead of letting them involve in activities by force, it will be better
to give them free time to study or to take breaks.
In
conclusion, as stated above, both views have strong
points. However, since students are not children, they should not participate
in other activities by force buy they should have options to choose whether they will
involve in other activities or not.
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