With the growth of the economic level, many governments regard that economic progress is the most important goal for a country. On the other hand, some people believe that other types of progress are equally important for a country. In this essay, I would discuss these views and suggest my opinion about this case.
On the one hand, it is evident that economic development is an important goal to raise a country's national impact or power on the world. If a country grows its economic power, people in the country are able to live a more convenient and rich life. Some people in poor countries subside and they are more likely to feel unhappy because of making a living. A high economic level can give citizens opportunities for education, cultures which make people happy. For instance, South Korea made a huge development of the economy for about 20 years in the past. This gives people a higher level and qualified education, cultures, jobs.
On the other hand, I am of the opinion that other types of progress are equally important for a country. There are significant factors to grow an economic level. People need healthy lifestyles, welfare for economic activities. In my opinion, healthy lifestyles assure effective economic activities, and, welfare for citizens' life gives people reassurance that they are protected by a government when they work. For example, nowadays, we can see less economic activities due to a lot of infected people and dangerous situation. Additionally, governments' welfare is playing very vital roles related to health. This means before economic activities, people need many things to live their life, such as physical, mental health.
To sum up, it is true that economic progress is an important goal for a country, however, I believe other types of progress are equally important. Kinds of health, education, welfare are essential factors for people's life and also economic activities.
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