The
diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and
reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. |
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The given process indicates the aluminium
cans’ recycling phases. Overall, there are seven sequences from the collection
of used cans, moving to the factory and the completion of recycling as products
including the reusing percentages in the UK. First, once aluminium cans are collated after
consumers throw into the aluminium only cans litter bin, it move to the place
to be washed. And tearing and shrinking is the next step after the items are distinguished
as the clean one. Subsequently, the aluminium material is heated and melted
before being rolled to a thickness from 2.5 mm to 6 mm. In order to make the sellable items, the
rolled aluminium is morphed as cans. In addition, In the UK, 74% of the recycled
cans are displayed in the supermarket to be sold to consumers. After consumers
finish their drinks or food in the recycled cans, these cans go through the
same process to be reused. |
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