<Topic> In many
countries, people are living in a ‘throwaway society’, where things are used
for a short time and thrown away. What are the causes or this and what
problems does it lead to? |
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These days, innumerable items are along with
people’s lives. We are willing to buy new smartphones, fashion trend is changing
in every quarter of a year and beady products attract us on the street. Some people
complain that people nowadays change their items so quickly and throw away
the old one easily. It is becoming severe issues in society as well as on the
Earth. In this essay, I would like to elucidate the sources of matter and how
the effects are going to be. First of all, after the industrial revolution
and modernization, people relish countless choices of one item. When it comes
to jeans, consumers need to choose what ‘types of’ jeans that they are going
to buy, boots-cut, skinny, knee-length, wide jeans, boyfriend jeans, light
color, dark color, and so forth. It means that people are able to buy all kinds
of jeans what can be worn according to their occasions and it may lead many supply
items kept in their wardrobe. With regards to the smartphone, if a person is
fed up with using a phone for a while, they do not have to think about it deeply.
Due to high market competition, countless items are sold at an affordable
price. The price and lack of choices are not huge factors anymore that consumers
used to consider. All they need to do is simply choosing, paying and taking the
latest item. ‘Throwaway society’ means, people toss old items
to the waste bin no matter whether the objects are usable or not. This commitment
implies the society can be suffered from excessive rubbish. Global warming
and pollutant are notorious issues all around the world. Since products which
are easy to be thrown usually made in a simple way and synthetic materials such
as plastic, metal and artificial glasses which are not eco-friendly. In this
atmosphere, the environment can be deteriorated, then people cannot pursue
the environmental sustainability. Furthermore, people in poverty could be
isolated from the community as they cannot spend enough money to buy new items.
As a result, poor people could be a peripheral group, cannot be the core society
members, it may influence detrimental impacts on society which has a scarcity
of solidarity. In conclusion, even though new fabulous products
are introduced in the market, people should deeply consider to purchase unnecessary
items to contribute themselves to the global environment and look after other
people in poverty. |
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