The
diagram illustrates the ingredients and manufacturing process of a fish pie.
Overall, fish pie production consists of eleven stages, including six steps of
preparing potatoes for the (일단 저도 넣어드리기는 했는데, 관사는 그냥 참고로만 보세요~여기에 너무 깊게 들어가실 필요는 없습니다. pie.
As
regards to the production line for potatoes, potatoes are delivered take up to one a month to be delivered. The delivered Delivered potatoes are cleaned to the stage of peeling and slice. After
undergoing all steps aforementioned, potatoes are put into the boiling machine
and then chilled. Finally, stored potatoes are collected into a machine that
puts them on the pie.
Looking
at the whole process, a factory receives salmon within 12 hours and sprinkles lemon
juice and salt on the salmon. Following this, salmon is steamed in the oven to
remove skin and bones from it. Salmon which go through removal of skin and bone
is inspected by a worker to be ready for pies. Prepared peas, sauce and salmon
are put into a microwave container with prepared potatoes on the top of the
pie. A completed fish pie is wrapped and freezed to be sent send to stores for
sales.
감사합니다 :)
총평: (7/7/7/7) 7.0
잘 써주신 편이긴 한데, are delivered up to one month 와 같이 평소 넝디님 실력에 비해 살짝 어색한 표현들이 있으므로 주의해주시고, 관사의 경우는 정 심심한데 잠이 안올 때에 한해서 공부해주시면 되겠습니다.
+다이어그램 유형의 경우 수동태 활용을 최우선 생명으로 여기시면 됩니다.
수고하셨습니다 :)