These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?
In recent years,
the number of people who want to be teachers are is decreasing, especially teachers
for secondary school students. There should be clear reasons for this issue and in this essay, I will explain the reasons as well as a solution in this essay.
To begin with, many
countries show the downward trend in those wishing to become becoming teachers for young children. The one
of One of the main reasons can be the lower salary compared to other job fields and
teacher’s hard task. This can be affected have an effect to young generation when they make decision
for their career. Second of all, taking care of young children can be really
challenging and tough so that this job requires strong physical strength and
patience that young applicants cannot be adapt. Besides, the parents of
children are eager to intervene in school system and it could cause a lot of
stress and pressure on teachers. The attitude towards teachers from parents is sometimes
very impolite and disrespectful. Therefore, many young generations hesitate to
become teachers.
To solve this
problem, the government should raise the salary and provide better work benefit
for teachers in secondary schools to make applicants think that they could receive
considerate money after their hard work. For example, in many European countries, a teacher is one of the most popular jobs teachers
are one of the most popular job because they receive more salary than other jobs
like engineers or programmers. The governments in those countries also provide
teachers free extended educational program such as studying abroad or in graduate
school. Plus, changing public awareness toward the teachers to be more positive
is the most important way of solving this problem. (이 내용과 관해서 한 줄 정도 부연설명을 더 추가하지 못할 경우 차라리 빼는 게 낫습니다.)
In conclusion, it is commonly known that teachers require various tough task over the decades and the country should reward them in a material way. Also, students and parents should be taking part in a class with respect towards their teachers. (이 내용을 결론에 넣을 거면, 본론2의 해결책에도 같이 들어가야 합니다.)
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