Your Answer ▼ It is believed that there are a number of Online news in our society. (현 사회에 수많은 온라인 뉴스가 있는 것은 가치가 담긴 사항이 아니라, 사실입니다. 고로 It is ture that there are a number of online news in our society.) Many people think that Online online news is not a reliable source, and they should only trust checked journalists. Personally, I absolutely disagree (이거 진짜 치명적인 오류입니다. 주의해주세요!) with this statement.
Firstly, there are a lot of rumors as well as and facts in Online online news. Nowadays, nowadays, some articles are true, while others are not and some news are not true. It leads to make people to think misunderstand and brings fear. For example, in currently in our society, we have a significantly hard time around the world. Because of the Corona virus, may be all most of people read nearly everyone reads the newspaper and watches the TV about the pandemic. Many people wonder how many people were infected and how many people died. However, some wrong Online online news gives wrong informations to us, some people believe these rumors and spread them other people. It can bring be brung many kinds of fears to them. However, they do not have a way to check whether this information is true or not they do not have way to check.
Secondly, there are not specialists in Online online news companies company. Many inexpert journalists were forced by immoral companies or also governments. For instance, when they bring news or information about healthy foods, due to immoral companies pressured to not recognised journalists, they write numerous articles to cheat people, then people will buy some foods for their health. (우선 이 문장의 경우 의도하신 바에 대해 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다. 또한, 문장이 절대로 길어지지 않도록 신경써주세요! 6.0 이하의 점수대에서는 무조건 문장 짧게 끊어가서 오류를 최소한으로 줄이는 게 좋습니다.) Many companies use advertisements to not-known people. Moreover, as our country has big problem politically, the governments sometime broadcast wrong news to cheat their citizens. For example, we We had serious accident few years ago, in which a number of students died in the ship. However, the government pressured many immoral company to write wrong news to give citizens.
In conclusion, it is our choice to believe whether numerous articles are true or not true, however, we should have a good judgement. (온라인 뉴스는 밑을만한 게 못된다로 적어주시면 됩니다.)
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