Some people believe that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the environment, others maintain that the major profit is the development of world business. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.
It is true that more and more countries are
cooperating for some benefits. Some people argue that the crucial benefits are
for the environment. However, other people claim that the progress of world
business is the main profit of cooperation.
To begin with, the environmental issues are
communal problems over the world. Therefore, all countries have to try to solve
these problems together, which is the reason why countries cooperate. For instance, the
government of Korea and the NASA which is the space incorporation in the United States united
states have been cooperating to observe the fine dust from space. By observing
it, they can predict the flow of the fine dust and prevent it. Thus, it can be said that international cooperation is for the environment.
On the other hand, a lot of countries can
make money by cooperating. For example, a few years ago, some Asian countries
and many Europe countries tried to cooperate on making trains like the Eurostar which traverse parts of Asia and Europe throughout the two continents (이런 식으로, 명백한 동의어가 없는 경우에도 대체하는 능력을 길러주시면 좋습니다.) Asia and Europe in order to make people travel to Asia and Europe
without boarding expensive airplanes. It was also aimed to make employments
such as train engineers and train crews. Also, it can save money in trading.
Although trading by trains takes more time than airplanes, it charges less
money than airplanes.
In conclusion, as stated above, both views
have strong points. However, it seems that the main profit of international
collaboration is the development of world business. That is because, it is
quite difficult to develop world business without any help from other
countries.
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