■ DirectionYou have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.■ QuestionSummarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET Candidate Name:텍스트 | Candidate Number:텍스트 | Centre Number:텍스트1 | Date:텍스트1 |
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Many educational institutions give greater importance to subjects related to science and ignore subjects such as drama and literature. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development? |
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A variety of educational institutions ranging from elementary school to university pay more attention on educating science subjects rather than literature subjects. It is an inevitable phenomenon to concentrating on science education in 4th industrial revolution, and pandemic makes people emphasize on scientific research to make innovative treatment to protect citizens from contagious disease. More educational choose their direction toward investing affordable resources like finance to improve quality of science modules. I absolutely agree this flow of adaptation and this essay will examine my personal opinion. Firstly, the most important role of educational intuitions is to help students adapt appropriately in modern society as soon as possible. For instance, there are so many job applications that can be only suitable for someone who has scientific knowledge. If they do not have sufficient ability that many companies request, it can be hard to find job. It is the most efficient way to acquire specific skills that society requires in competitive society so that educational intuitions should make students prepare for rapidly changing atmosphere of the contemporary age. As I mentioned, a pandemic makes this trend more fast as all global countries want vaccine desperately, it is mandatory to do more science education to produce talented pharmaceutical researcher. Secondly, in artistic subjects like literature, it is much more informative class to get student to watch artworks depending on personal taste and feel themselves freely. It is so subjective that teacher cannot teach all the students with the exactly same class materials. For example, when people appreciate same artworks, it does not matter whether they feel it is gorgeous or disgusting as. There is no correct answer. I reckon artistic class is sufficient enough for students to get appropriate education in household respectively so that education institution can concentrate on conveying more practical subjects related to science.
To recapitulate, we cannot ignore artistic subjects that sometimes inspire us strongly, it cannot help escaping from weigh more importance on objective subjects in most educational institutions. |
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EXAMINER’S USE ONLY | Total Score: /9 | Examiner: | | TR (Task Response) | CC (Coherence and Cohesion) | LR (Lexical Resource) | GRA (Grammatical Range and Accuracy) | Score | /9 | /9 | /9 | /9 |
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목표 점수는 7.0, 걸린 시간은 44분입니다(검토하다가 본론 1이 이상한거 같아서 다시 쓰느라 오래걸렸습니다ㅠ) 항상 감사합니다!!