■ DirectionYou have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.■ QuestionSummarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET Candidate Name:텍스트 | Candidate Number:텍스트 | Centre Number:텍스트1 | Date:텍스트1 |
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Topic ▼
A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday
for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter.
-explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping
holiday.
-describe some possible disadvantages.
-say whether you would like to go camping with your friend
this summer.
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Your Answer ▼
Dear Kwon-Su.
I am glad to hear that you're going on a camping holiday for the
first time this summer. I think you would enjoy a camping holiday because it It
could give you a good impression. Last summer, I went on a camping holiday alone
for 30 days. I was able to feel stable and let my complex thoughts be relaxing.
But there would be something dangerous. Especially, at night, it would be very
cold to sleep, even if you prepare the heating system perfectly. There would be a
strong wind that can make your tent over. So please prepare lots of things that can keep you safe and warm as many as possible. (조금 더 풍부한 답안을 위해서는 실제 어떠한 것들이 있는지를 such as로 적어주시는 것도 좋습니다.)
Fortunately, I am also planning to would also like go camping with Su-Hyun this
summer. If the schedule is possible, we can get together 2~3 days. We can make
the place where we will meet. At that time, I think I could help you more
rather than writing this way.
Good luck to your first camping holiday.
Sincerely (친구한테 쓰는 표현은 아닙니다.), Lim-Sung Kim
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EXAMINER’S USE ONLY | Total Score: 6.0/9 | Examiner: | | TR (Task Response) | CC (Coherence and Cohesion) | LR (Lexical Resource) | GRA (Grammatical Range and Accuracy) | Score | 6/9 | 6/9 | 6/9 | 6/9 |
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Comment ▼ 6.0 정도는 어찌어찌 맞춰지긴 하지만, 한 가지 짚고 넘어가야 할 사항은 있습니다. 편지글을 쓸 때에는 내 글의 수신자가 누구인지를 잘 파악하고, 이에 맞춰 써주셔야 합니다. 지금 글은 친구한테 쓰는 거죠. 그런데 우리가 한국에서 친구한테 편지를 쓸 때, '길동이가.' 라고 쓰지, '홍길동' 이라고 쓰지 않는 것처럼, 영어 역시 마찬가지입니다. 이러한 상황에서 성을 넣을 필요는 없어요.
수고하셨습니다 :) |
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목표점수 6.0/다음 시험일자 1월 24일/글 쓰기 시간 15분/단어 수 166/외부 도움 없음