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It is suggested that high school students must do voluntary works as which assist their social skills through communication and working in a team. In contrast, it stuents 주어설정 주의 may not learn anything because of if there is no motivation of from students. In my view, working with no payment is quite beneficial effects to students as it can provide many valuable skills.
As regards the disadvantages of doing unpaid community service, students do not know about the meaning of voluntary works and also they cannot learn many skills. They just tend to follow some activities because of it is a compulsory activity. Furthermore, teenagers do have not have motivation about voluntary service. Nowadays, unfortunately, there is a materialistic society so students tend to try hard when it is related to result of subject. This can be seen in South Korea where has voluntary service related to extra credit in grades, so it can promote motivation to students easily. Therefore, youngsters do not have any knowledge why they should do a unpaid community service. Thus, (comma) compulsory programmes can contribute to detrimental effects without any lesson, (comma) such as stress? values of hard work?.
Most importantly, the greatest merit of doing unpaid community service is that students can improve the quality of standard living. sStudents are given various experiences by through these acitivities. So, (comma) it can be helpful in society after graduated from schools because the level of high school students are ready to be an adult ?이해되지 않는 내용, What level?. Especially, in the case of improving the neighborhood, which can lead social skills into learning, (comma) so youngsters are able to learn communication and face-to-face skills as well. Then, they can acquire friendly relations with their peers after being society members. Moreover, students can know unpaid activities are quite difficult and earning the money is not easy as well. soSo, (comma) they can experience it in advance. While students who do unpaid community service have a high adaptability in society, other students may not have a social adaption ability.
To sum up, compulsory programmes are benefical effects to students' future and their qulity of standard living. I wish government should establish a policy for these programmes.
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