Topic : You went to a local restaurant for a meal with your family. Write to a local newspaper to give the feedback.
1. where is restauant located in
2 what you had for the meal.
3.why do you recommend this restaurant to others
Dear Sir or Madam,
I recently visited a local seafood restaurant called Crab Shack which is located on 17 Queen`s avenue (Avenue, Street 등은 한국어로 치면 xx'로' 에 해당되는데, 이때 '로' 까지 싹 묶어서 하나의 고유명사로 취급한다고 보시면 됩니다. 즉, 대문자 시작이에요.) avenue. I am writing this letter to share my unforgettable experience and describe a delicious dinner I had at the restaurant.
I vividly remembered that I visited the restaurant on Friday, more specifically on 16th December along with my family to celebrate our for the 10th wedding anniversary. We were so excited about the number of choices that they offered for dinner. We ordered Set B which was included tiger prawns, crabs, clams, oysters, mussels, salmons and scallops with some vegetables. It was so tasty and well-cooked dishes. In addition, it was garnished well and looked delicious appetite. Moreover, they had several varieties of dessert to choose from. We chose their signature dessert rainbow cakes and it was lip-smacking as well.
I would definitely recommend the restaurant to anyone, especially those who are looking to dine outdoors on special occasions. I would personally rate it a five out of on five. They also arrange a concert every day. (앞뒤 문장들과 너무 뜬금없이 끊어집니다.)
I would strongly give a thumbs up to this restaurant and appreciate various dishes that they offered at an affordable price.
I hope that I have given some valuable information that could help people who are on the lookout for some great restaurants.
Yours faithfully,
Gwangmook Lim
총평: (7/6/7/6) 6.5
일단 표현 관련해서는 되게 좋았습니다. lookout, thumbs up 등은 구어로써 편지글에 충분히 쓰일만한 좋은 친구들이고, 이게 강점으로 작용할 거에요. 대신 문법과 CC, 즉 글 전반적인 자연스러운 흐름 관련해서는 간혹 어색한 사항들이 보이므로 수정해주세요~수고하셨습니다 :)