■ You should spend about 40 minutes on this task
■ Present a written argument or case to an educated reader no special knowledge of?the?following topic
■ You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant ???evidence
■ You should write at least 250 words

If a product of good quality and meets people’s need, then people will buy it. So advertisement is unnecessary and no more than a form of entertainment. But some people think advertisements provide information of products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary society, products we need  are plentiful and consumers can get information of the product it more easily than ever before because of (thanks to) advertising. Some argue that advertising is necessary but others believe that  advertisements  are  not needed. The statement above will be discussed in detail.

First of all, consumers agree that advertising is useful to get information of the product on the market and a company can introduce their new product throughout the method. For this reason, the customer can save time to search information they want and they can be meet their demand in an easy way.(한문장으로 바꾸는것이 더 좋을 것 같은데요.  The customers can save time for searching information through advertisement. 예로는 뭐 가족 식탁을 사야할때 나는 광고를 보고 한시간 만에 좋은 물건을 찾았는데 엄마는 친구들에게 조언을 구하고 직접가서 보고 이러느라 엄청 힘들고 오래걸렸다.)  Secondly, advertising havehas played an important roles certainly in modern society. For example, it encourages people to consume things such as a products and services, which is very helpful to advance industries. Furthermore, advertising companies create can offer income for newspapers, TVs and even an internet websites. so advertising is regarded a significant factor in the society.(To sum up, advertisement has benefits to the society by .....)

On the other hand, advertisements can cause overconsumption, particularly, conspicuous consumption with a watch, bags and so on, which are pretty unnecessary. To be specific, it can stimulate people to buy unnecessary things such as .....  Moreover, in terms of advertising, vulnerable children can be exposed accept bad things : like alcohol and a cigarette through advertisements. In this respect,  there appears to be dangerous to children because they don’t have ability to judge which commodity is useful and beneficial.

In conclusion, even though advertising is a little has some drawbacks, but it also has many advantages including stimulating consumption can be beneficial to industries. Due to negative aspects of advertising, specially, we should  control children more carefully when watching bad advertising or consumption ,and then the  industrial society of the next generation will be much advanced constantly. (어떻게 수정을 해야할지...)