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▶ Your Answer : The prevalence of globalisation is sure to have far-reaching effects on individuals. From this aspect, a contentious>> 비격식체의 단어로 분류가 되구요 사람한테 어울리는 형용사로 controversial 이 좋겠네요 question is raised whether learning about a country as well as the culture and lifestyle is useful for grasping a language of the nation or not. In my opinion, pros>> advantages 가 더 좋은 표현입니다 will bring
Positive effects to learning a language are found. Considering the fact that language is connected with other intricated factors, language learners >> 가산명사에는 단복수 형태를 만들어주셔야 합니다 can experience synergy effects because the language including lexical ambiguity, complex structure in sentenses, and numerous words is based on culture and the indivisuals' lifestyle, and, sometimes, a meaning of words is transfered to other meanings because of a rapid changing trend. For example, bilingual people are aware of a wide range of knowledge which is not only proficient use of language but also other respects related to the country such as history, a fashion trend, and general citizenship. Therefore, studying diverse factors like >> like은 문어체에 가깝습니다 culture or lifestyle will
However, studying other aspects for learning language is not always desirable. Although the swift change of era makes a barrier
In a nutshell, concentrating on culture and lifestyle to find a shortcut to learn language has limitation and obstacles such as additional time and ironic endeavour 단복수 형태 오류가 많습니다 문장 구성하는 style 상의 문제도 본문에서 보였구요 이번 글은 오류가 많네요 두 견해를 제시하고 의견을 제시하는 글이 아니라 동의하면 동의하는 내용 하지 않으면 그에 반하는 내용 혹은 부분적으로 동의하는 내용(이 내용은 동의하지 않는 내용이 대부분이여야겠죠) 으로 구성되어야 합니다 주장을 명확히 해주세요 빨간 표시해드린 부분들 잘 봐주시길 바랍니다 Task Achievement - 5 Coherence and Cohesion - 6 Lexical Resource - 6 Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 5 5.5 예상합니다 |
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